VociferousMusic's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[stupid voice demo]

Have you ever thought about applying to speak some voices for kids TV shows? :D
I like your voice acting.

[RaFii - Blue Sky (original mix)]

I can hear out many different music genres. I would consider this as EDM (electronic dance music). A House usually is a bit more relaxing and not that 'progressive'.

The song is very uplifting indeedly, I definitely would dance to it!

Here are some tips/suggestions for you:
- you should optimize the kick and snare a bit. The kick is supressing the snare and it's barely hearable. A strong and powerful snare is a neat addition to dance music
- you should work with more variations. I figured after the half of the song, the exact same elements are repeating. For the further songs, you definitely should make some changes to the second drop/pre-drop and make the entire track more interesting.

I looked up at your age and you definitely deserve my respect! You remind me of myself when I was at your age. :)

DJR-18 responds:

thank you for responding! :-)
its a great opportunity to get a feedback from a good musician!
thanks for the tip ;-)....but i can't edit the song because I'm using a demo version of FL studio...badly i can't edit it ;-(... but anyway I am working on a new track and I will apply the tips you said for me on it :-)...
thank you very much for your tips:-)...BTW how can I thank you...:-)
sorry if i repeated the song...i am working on a new track and then I will spend many time for it....this feedback of yours is very helpful...I will put a stronger snare because i forgot to put the snare on the mixer LoL.....thank you very much..hope i will be like you at your age....and if i will have a job... i will buy some tools needed for making music because i just use laptop and broken headphones for this ;-).....thank you very much...you pushed me to make more music....and also you deserve my support for you;-)

and btw i am studying and busy to school...i will also study about dubstep music:-)

advance happy easter.......

GOOD MORNING FROM THE PHILIPPINES ;-)))))))

[Kingdom of Salt]

The melody was very well done, I can hear effort out of it, respect!
Besides cinematic, I could see this serving for ambient music as well.

Besides the flute appearing at 1:20, there is another electronic sound coming along. As you worked with organic sounds over the entire song, I would have used another sound for this, another organic instrument such as a harp or a pizzicato string.

Otherwise, this is fantastic!

[OwLz - A Virtual Riot]

I like the music box appearing at the intro and outro, but I generally like those metallic sounds. The melody is very dreamy and relaxing, while the drop has a good wumps.

Here are some tips/suggestions:
- I think there is a sub bass missing in the pre-drop (0:25-0:52). At least there is a deeper sound missing to complete the entire harmony.
- the drop is a bit overdriving, the instrument probably all are a bit too noisy and playing all together causes a bit of volume overdrive
- as I mentioned the melody is very dreamy, the usage of more effects such as reverbs and hall effects might sound quite nice to it.

Anyway, those are tips I hope you can work with and help you. :)

[-Race Around the Desert-]

Very groovy! The fulltime step makes it actionful while the melody is pretty relaxing. I really enjoyed listening to it!
The choice of instruments gave me the touch of a dry, desert moderately showplace.

[[ Old ] Invasion 2046]

Sounds very relaxing in the first line. If this is a Dubstep or not... well I think everyone is having their own opinion about it. For me it doesn't really sound like that, but you also have to consider that the sound-variety of dubs wasn't that huge back in 2013.

However, I mostly leave a tip when rating other's work, but for this one I don't really have any suggestion for improvements. The song is nice like it is.

PS: I like the drums, they don't follow that usual kick-snare-kick-snare concept and I like the way you played with the kick.

Th3TwisteD responds:

Thanks for the great support !
I really appreciate it !!

[Charliux - Unycha]

So far this is the first work of your's I'm listening to. The drop isn't bad at all!
You did a very good job with the pre-drop and the anime voices.

Now my tip for you: You should pay attention to what sounds you place more in the background and which you place in the foreground.
I think the dubs in the drop are a bit too noisy. They suppress the other sounds, especially the drums, that are very important, especially I think the snare could deserve a bit more of volume.
Example: 1:25 - 1:27 the dub is suppressing the the snare heavily, to the point it barely is noticable.

But besides that, this track is very neat! :)

charliux210123 responds:

Thx guy, i'll improve the next time ;)

[Bunny From Another Galaxy]

Oh this sounds very much like the golden 90ties. Sounds like a spacy dream trance with also hard trance elements in it. This reminds me on my own work I've done a few years ago, I also had many, many space fantasies those days. :D

However, I really like this!

Wubkat responds:

Thank you for the follow and positive feedback!

[Long Truck Road]

Oh this definitely fits very well to a oldschool jump&run game!
I like it, the choice of sounds and the melody, really has something metro to it, which I like quite a lot.

Just next time, please use another snare, this one sounds a bit... dull. :P

TayMX responds:

akay, I will improve ~
thanks for the comment

[Last Music of 2017]

Epic and uplifting are my keywords for this.
This is very well done and I definitely can imagine this soundtrack playing in the background for some fantasy related action movie.
Definitely worth the five stars for me! :)

May I ask, are you working with Kontakt 5 libraries or what kind of libraries to you use?